I have a good day的英语作文怎么写

To Discribe what you did during the day and make you happy !...

I have a good day.（题目） Today I had a good day.Because today was my birthday.My parents had a birthday party for me. My classmates and friends came and sent many prasents to me.Mary gave me a doll(女)/model ship(男).I like it very much.The others gave me some birthday cards. They are so beautiful.It's a good day today.I were very happy. 因为不知道你想要什么水平的 所以按初中水准写 不知道可不可以 这篇文章要用一般过去式来写 因为是一天过后 来总结说今天过的很好 今天是美好的一天 内容和题材范围都很广 可以以生日、野餐、游玩……来写 这里因为时间关系 只写了生日的一篇 不知道和不合适

写的不错耶,至少我没发现什么错误或者是问题 我人为楼上的那篇就可以了.