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As is well known, friendship is very important to all of us. Good friends are the invaluable treasures in your life. They always take care of you even if they can’t come along with you all the time. Relationship can bring you warm and happiness that couldn’t be bought by money.

Some people believe that relationship is beneficial to the personal development in society. For one thing, it can give you good public praise in making friends. You can concern and help each other. For another, it can bring you the most loyalist advice. A real friend will break down these walls which puzzled you if you lose the direction of advance.

In my opinion, relationship is good medicine to treat your body and mind. First of all, relationship is sanative to our health. You can pour out of your trouble which couldn’t be told to your parents or colleagues to your good friends. It can alleviate your pressure. Secondly, friends can give you the courage to burst