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As is known,that is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies.Most the large towns in Florida and California have already run paarticularly lessons for babies .The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where,in several countries,special courses are now offered to the children who are from 7 to 24 month old.The first step is to have child get rid of fear of water.Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear ,the child can master the technique and push him forward through the water.
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As is known(as known),that(it) is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies.Most(of) the large towns in Florida and California have already run particularly(particular) lessons for babies .The idea has(was) quickly spread to Europe from where,in several countries,special courses are now offered to the children who are from 7 to 24 month(monthes) old.The first step is to have child get rid of (the)fear of water.Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear ,the child can master the technique and push him(himself) forward through the water.

As is(改it) known,that(改it) is interesting to teach children to swim while(改when) they are still babies.Most (of) the large towns in Florida and California have already run paarticularly lessons for babies .The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where (it is),in several countries,special courses are now offered to the children <who are>(删去) from 7 to 24 month(months) old.The first step is to have(改make)