英语题,急???

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The journey,during which the sailing time was
30days ,was a great success.
改错,讲解一下.

The journey,during 30 days of the sailing
,was a great success
感觉句子有些混乱,during后面应该是一短语,时间短语,如果是一从句,让句子看起来没主次之分。

The journey,during which of the sailing time was
30days ,was a great success.