高分悬赏!!!!!英文翻译,高手来救救俺!!!!

---楼上好象是机器翻译的吧。
I'm sorry to trouble you,dear teacher.First of all,I'll say to you "Thanks for your hard work"!My English ability is really poor,but in fact,I have tried my best.Could you add some points to me? Thank you very much.Wish you all the best in the future work.And may you make a fortune every day. Thanks again.

---人工翻译，质量有保证。

I am terribly sorry to bring you so much trouble. First of all, I have to say You are a really good teacher and you really pour your blood into everyone's study! However, My English is so bad even I try every possible means to get better results.I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a higher score. So much thanks for you.
I wish everything in the future all goes well with you, and everyday happiness. Again,thank you!
感觉这样更加婉转而且诚恳，表达出自己的意愿同学生尊敬长辈应有的礼貌，我自己翻译的。希望你成功了！！！呵呵

I am sorry to disturb you a teacher, first of all, to you,一声: You worked hard! My English is bad, but I was re