陈慧琳的 Love paradise的中文翻译

希望语句要通顺合理，不要使用金山快译或其他软件直接翻译。另外，我附上歌词。
you're always on my mind,
all day just all the time.
you're everything to me,
brightest star to let me see.
you touch me in my dreamed,
we kissed in everything.
I pray to be with you
through all the shinging day.
I'll love you till I die,
deep the sea
wide this sky.
the beauty of my life is
the rainbow everywhere we go.
need you all my life
you're my heart up you're my pride.
in your arms i found my heaven.
in your eyes my see is sky.
then nothing I love pair of time
you're always on my mind,
all day?all the time.
you're everything to me,
brightest star to let me see.
you touch me in my dreamed,
we kissed in everything.
i pray to be with you
through all the shinging day.
i'll love you till i die,
deep the sea
wide this sky.
the beauty of my life is
the rainb

You're always on my mind
你一直都在我脑海里
All day just all the time
每一天每一时
You're everything to me
你是我的全部
Brightest star to let me see
你呈现了最闪亮的星星攘我看
We kiss in every scene
我们吻在每一个漂亮风景里
I pray to be with you through rain and shiny day
我祈祷着不管在雨天或天晴都和你在一起

I'll love you till I die
我爱你直到我死
Deep as sea wide as sky
爱的像海一样深天一样阔
The beauty of our paints rainbows
我们那彩虹图的美丽
Everywhere we go
我们走到那里
Need you all my life
我需要你在我的一生
You're my hope
你是我的希望
You're my pride
你是我的自豪
In your eyes my sea and sky
在你眼里我的海和天空
May life be our LOVE PARADISE
生命成为我们俩的爱情天堂

全人工的。还是英文好，听这歌还不错，译成中文比较肉麻。。。
你一直在我脑海里
一整天也就是一直（总在）
你是我的一切
是我见过的最明亮的星星
你在我梦中出现
我们互相亲吻对方
我祈祷能和你在一起
在所有有光的日子里
我会爱你至死
像海一样深
像天空一样广阔
我的生活美丽得就像
我们去的地方出现的彩虹
我的一生都需要你
你是我的心上人是我的骄傲