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中国的首都北京是一个即现代有古老的城市。北京是中国六大历史名城之一，有着很长的历史，这里有很多古建筑群，给人以庄严而神圣的感觉。长城不只是中国最伟大的建筑，它也是世界十大奇观之一。还有故宫是中国最大的历史博物馆；颐和园是中国最大的皇家园林等。这还只是北京而已，还有好多好玩的城市呢，如果你喜欢幽雅闲适，可以去江南小镇江苏杭州，那里有悠悠的小河和精致的阁楼；如果你喜欢体验中国少数民族的文化，可以去云南的西双版纳，那里有篝火和动听的歌谣；如果你喜欢热闹喧嚣，可以去广州上海，那里是经济贸易相当发达的城市；如果你喜欢古香古色，可以去西安，那里有著名的秦始皇兵马俑。每个地方都有每个地方的特点吧。听我说完之后你是不是也很向往来这里看看？
Beijing, the capital of China, is a very ancient and modern city. It is one if the six ancient cities in china. It has a long history and there are so many groups of ancient buildings which are very magnificent. Do you know the Great Wall of China? The Great Wall is the most famous building not only in china but also in the world. And the Forbidden City is the biggest museum in china. The Summer Palace is the biggest imperial park of china. All above are the interesting places in Beijing. There are also lots of other interesting cities, such as Jiangsu and Hangzhou which is very leisurely and comfortable and have loquacious streams and cockloft which is built over the