帮我看下这篇英语作文有没有什么毛病。

修正稿如下：
I like living in the suburbs, because the suburbs are clean and quiet.Many houses have big yards and there are some trees and flowers along the road in the suburbs.The neighbors are very friendly to me there. There isn't much noise and heavy traffic, so I like suburbs best.
1、一篇作文里面最好不要句型单一：如there be
2、There isn't noisy and heavy词性不对 there be后加 名词
3、句子意思表达不到位There are many houses with big yards, some trees and flowers in the suburbs

如果是初中或小学的话 还算OK啦。高中以上的话作文就得写好点啦。:-)

i like living in the suburbs, because the suburbs are clean and quiet.Many houses have big yards and there are some trees and flowers along the road in the suburbs.The neighbors are very friendly to me there. There isn't much noise and heavy traffic, so I like suburbs best

...,some trees and flowers are in the suburbs.缺be动词
...,so I like suburbs best.却主语

i like living in the suburbs, because the suburbs are clean and quiet.Many houses hav