英语好的过来看看啊

自己尝试翻译了一下
翻译五月天歌词还是蛮好玩得事情
因为有感情~

不过不恰当的地方 请多多指教

how to hold the rainbow
怎么去拥有一道彩虹

how to hold the estival wind
怎么去拥抱一夏天的风

the ethereal stars are laughing the human
天上的星星笑地上的人

they always can not understand and feel enough
总是不能懂不能觉得足够

if i am falling in love with your smile
如果我爱上你的笑容

how to make me keep it and collect it
要怎么收藏要怎么拥有

if your happy is not for me
如果你快乐不是为我

maybe let it go, that is actual having
会不会放手其实才是拥有

the kate fly into the sky when wind coming
当一阵风吹来风筝飞上天空

Kaddish and beatitude just for you
为了你而祈祷而祝福而感动

finally your silhouette is disappered in the end of stream
终于你身影消失在人海尽头

i suddenly notice that tears come out with laughing is the extremely pain
才发现笑着哭最痛

you and me at that massif in that day
那天你和我那个山丘

using the same way to sing