UC知道请英文好的看下这两个问题的回答应该怎么修改呢
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1. Describe your greatest achievement in the past 4-5 years?
I think I’ m one of lucky girl and can stay in Shenzhen and also came to true of finished my university life. (I graduated from vocational school before here) it’s true. I’m proud of myself on investment of education. The ability of deal with problem and general personal quality were improved to me. Meanwhile, I master English to communicate with others.
2. What are you short and long term career view? What do you think is the most ideal job for you?
Speak of career, I hope I will be a translator I’m also clear it’s not easy. For example, what’s exactly to keep study while it doesn’t affect work? Besides, there will give up spare time and many things like that. I’m interesting in translation of English; one of attraction is different culture and custom. Further, I am very enjoying knowing about it. And maybe you are like a bridge between one and another culture.
回答者：jinglijin - 经理 四级
你如果英语好的话，请帮忙修改，
I think I’ m one of lucky girl and can stay in Shenzhen and also came to true of finished my university life. (I graduated from vocational school before here) it’s true. I’m proud of myself on investment of education. The ability of deal with problem and general personal quality were improved to me. Meanwhile, I master English to communicate with others.
2. What are you short and long term career view? What do you think is the most ideal job for you?
Speak of career, I hope I will be a translator I’m also clear it’s not easy. For example, what’s exactly to keep study while it doesn’t affect work? Besides, there will give up spare time and many things like that. I’m interesting in translation of English; one of attraction is different culture and custom. Further, I am very enjoying knowing about it. And maybe you are like a bridge between one and another culture.
回答者：jinglijin - 经理 四级
你如果英语好的话，请帮忙修改，
修改什么 ？？这英语也太烂了 标准的中国话英语 到哪里面试都通不过
I think I’ m one of lucky girl and can stay in Shenzhen and also came to true of finished my university life. 这句话就有错误 谓语居然变化？？你也太牛了。 一个句子一会在过去一会在现在 人家一看就知道你是外行啊