高手帮忙改英语作文

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It is very necessary to be a good university studend.Good university students is the foundation of the construction of the motherland.If you didn't want to be a good student you will lose the best opportunity to study.
How to be a good university student?There are several prerequistes to be a good university student:good character，study hard,health body,etc.
What I will do in the future is as follows.I'll help anybody
who need help.I'll cherish this chance to study.I play basketball twice a week ,so I don't worry about my healty.

在你的基础上改一些错的地方，当然，在句子结构和样式多样上还需要下功夫。好的文章不是用的词多，而是用了恰当的词
It is very necessary to be a good university studend（student).Good university students is (are)the foundation of the construction of the motherland.If you didn't(don't因为你讲的是一个客观的事，不是指过去） want to be a good student you will lose the best opportunity to study.
How to be a good university student?There are several prerequistes（这个好像写错了吧，可以改为factors) to be a good university student:good character，study hard(并列几个名词词组，可以用hard study）,health(healthy) body,etc.
What I will do in the future is as follows（following).I'll help anybody
who need(needs) help.I'll cherish this chance to(of,珍惜学习的机会） study.I(will) play basketball twice a week ,so I don't worry about my healty（health).

第一句中 university studend应该改为university student
health body 应该改为 healthy body
who need help 应该改为 who needs help 前面是不定代词,所以应该用第三人称单数
最后一个词healty 应该改为 health,是不是楼主打错了啊?呵呵
还有 There are several prerequiste