UC知道帮我检查一下英语文章my bedroon.
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My Bedroom
This is my bedroom, there is a bed near the wall. Near mu bed,
there is a study,there are some books and a computer on my study.
there is a photo of my family on the wall. I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Can you feel my brdroom is very beautiful ?
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom, there is a bed near the wall. Near mu bed,
there is a study,there are some books and a computer on my study.
there is a photo of my family on the wall. I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Can you feel my brdroom is very beautiful ?
修改后：
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom, there is a bed next to the wall. Near my bed,there is a desk.There are some books and a computer on it.There is a photo of my family on the wall. I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Do you think my brdroom is very beautiful ?
Near mu bed——Near my bed
there is a study——there is a study room
on my study——on my study room
最后一句最好改一下
Do you think my bedroom is clear?