初中口语自我介绍，请修改

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My name is Li Yishen. I'm fourteen years old. I am from class two-five-nine. And my favoride hobby is reading novel.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sport. So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is bad.Because happy is the best!
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1,And my favoride hobby is reading novel.
这句话可改为I enjoy reading novels.
2,So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is bad.Because happy is the best!
改为Though I am a little fat ,I don't think it is bad.Because I think to be happy is the most important!

把favorite去掉，与hobby重复
novels
happy－－happiness

years old 不要，多余！ class two-five-nine什么意思，hobby不要修饰了，把前面那个次不要。最后那个BUT不要，

My name is Li Yishen. I'm fourteen years old. I am from class two-five-nine and my favorite hobby is reading novels.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sports. I am a little fat ,but I don't think it bad.Because happiness is the best!