找错误并修改 英语

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I am dependable, steady and positive. I have a serious and cautious attitude towards working. In addition, I am glad to cooperate with teammates and to summarize my shortage and seek for advice modestly. And another, I have the sense of responsibility and the courage to shoulder the work pressure.

I am a dependable, steady and positive man(这样表达比较好 参a steady man). I have a strict(严谨的) and cautious attitude towards work(工作本身是名词). In addition,I am glad to cooperate with teammates,sum up experience (总结经验教训)and follow the advisable suggestions modestly.Furthermore, I have a strong sense of responsibility and have the courage to undertake a heavy workload(have the courage to有勇气去做 是个固定词组).

感觉summarize 前面的to 可能去掉,
而且整体语言感觉不是很地道.

没发现有什么错误。。。