中译英一句(大大们不要机译呀,哭了)

Don't you know that today most people of service industry are male?

Don't you know that most people of service industry are male of today?

Don't you konw that many successful persons in tertiary production are male?

don't you know that many people who succeed in service trade are men ?

哎。。。这里已经是机译者的澡堂了。。

你不知道现在有很多从事服务业的成功人士是男的吗?

May I remind you that in nowadays, the bulk of service industry practioners with a successful career background are males?

Don't you know that it is men who are successful for undertaking the service .