UC知道麻烦英语好的修改下谢谢了
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One man just has one life. And what does life mean? In my opinions, life means to struggle for goals within all life time.
Someone or something can make me angry and depression, and some people often laughing at me. However , there is no need for me to care about those. A great people , Mark Twain,said it like this:" Keep away from people who try to look down on your ambitions. Small people always do that,but the really great people make you feel that you too,can become great."
I don't have started out in life in the best situation,but if I have a clear goal and believe in ourselves, nothing can stop me.
And now , I want to tell everyone who is in difficulty as well as myself:Don't say" I can't " without trying. Jump higher,work harder, be more confidence and more perseverance,it's too easy to us, isn't it?
Therefore, I Believe everyon can perform miracles besides me!!!
第1行中opinions改为opinion; in one`s opinion为固定句型,这里不需要用复数.
第3行中depression改为depressed; 前者为n.,后者为adj.
第4行中there is no need for me to care about those有点Chinglish的味道,改为there is no need caring about it.
第5行中it删掉;
第8行中ourselves改为myself;
第10行中confidence改为confident;more perseverance改为perseverant; too改为very,to改为for; 注意too...to句型是太...而不能的意思.
第11行besides改为including.
PERFORM MIRACLES
One man (just) has ONLY one life. And what does life mean? In my opinion(s), life means to struggle for goals (with)in all life time.
Someone or something can make me angry and depressED(ion), and some people often laugh(ing) at me(.), (However ,) BUT there is no need for me to (care) BE SERIOUS (about) TO those. A great (people) MAN, Mark Twain, ONCE said it like this: "(Keep) STAY away from people who try to look down on your ambitions. Small people always do that, but (the) really great people make you feel that you too, can become great."
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