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Last Winter Holiday

I went to Jiangsu last winter and the weather was bad and snowy. The food wasn't delicious to me, and it tasted yucky. I did a lot of things in winter, such as going to museums, and going around. There were many interesting things. The trip was really excited so I wrote to my friend.

以下的还是要你自己来了

Last winter, I went to Jiangsu where snow laid thick on the ground and it was bitterly cold, nor was the delicacy food over there.
Fortunately, I did a lot of things and visited a number of museums in the vicinity which contained a great architectural interest and then I was delight to write a letter to my friend.

Last Winter Holiday

I went to Jiangsu last winter and the weather was bad and snowy. The food wasn't delicious to me, and it tasted yucky. I did a lot of things in winter, such as going to museums, and going around. There were many interesting things. The trip was