翻译：“这小伙带着女友，几年之前来北京闯荡，现在已经成为了‘北漂一族’”

This guy came to Beijing with his girlfrined several years ago and now has become one of the "drifting people in Beijing".

Bring by girl friend young man,how long before come because Beijing make a living away from home, become ' float the north by clan ' already now

This guy took his girlfriend to come to beijing for work a couple of years ago,now they've become "worker in beijing"

This guy came to Beijing with his GF a couple years ago and has become a group of city wanderer.

囧：
Several years ago, this chap muddled along in Bejing with his girl. Now he has been one of the so-called“Drifting people in Bejing”.

亮靓的时刻 -'s is much better.