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Hi the members in the group

Unfortunately, I missed final group meeting today .It is a pity.Just coz by some reason.But trust me these kind of reason was very important to me .Over 3 month time not in Finland during summer vacation bring me lots of problem such as contact with related people .

I have to admit that there`s a little bit selfish about that :(

But I have read all the email and all the slides send by u guys.Though we have some arguments during the process.I still hope that there will be a good ending tomorrow
COZ we are already in the final step :)

As the arrangement has been made ,if there `s any work I can do for you just let me know ASAP.If not I will looking forward to tomorrow`s wonderful presentation made by our fantastic group members :)
Have a nice summer vacation

Hi the members in (of) the group (或 group members)

Unfortunately, I missed (the) final group meeting today. It is a pity. Just coz by (of) some reason. But trust me these kind(s) of reason(s) was (were) very important to me .Over (the past) 3 month(s') time, not in Finland during (the) summer vacation bring (brought) me lots of problem(s) such as contact with related people . (这段语法表达不顺,请修改)

I have to admit that there`s a little bit selfish about that :(

But I have read all the email(s) and all the slides send by u guys.Though we have some arguments during the process.I still hope that there will be a good ending tomorrow
COZ we are already in the final step :)

As the arrangement has been made ,if there `s any work I can do for you just let me know ASAP.If not I will (X) looking (look) forward to tomorrow`s wonderful presentation made (X) by our fantastic group members :)
Have a nice summer vacation

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