请问这个句子有没有错误?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/05 15:15:16
Significant fluctuations in the brake factor occur,however, thus limiting the range of application of this type of drum brake and making necessary a system of brake force apportioning which is well matched to the vehicle in question.
limiting和making是不是应该为limit和make?

Significant fluctuations in the brake factor occur,however, thus limiting the range of application of this type of drum brake and making necessary a system of brake force apportioning which is well matched to the vehicle in question.

楼上说的不对
这段绝对有问题的。。。语句不顺。。

整体没错。

但感觉occur后面的however以及thus连接不畅,最好这样写:

The occurence of significant fluctuations in the brake factor, though...., limits the range......