翻译几句话,急!!!要正确的!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have made one year etiquette service, in the Great Hall of the People, I likes here very much, hoped that can work in here, makes contribution, I simple dining room English, also in the study spoken English, hope that now may be the service assistant first, I will sharpen my spoken language ability as soon as possible, will then apply other Service sector.

希望可以帮助到你~

I have made for one year the etiquette serve, in the Great Hall of the People, I like here very much, hope to work here, try one's bit, restaurant English that I will be simple, still study spoken language of English now, hopes to serve a assistant first, I will improve my spoken ability as soon as possible, and then apply to other service departments.
希望可以帮助你

我试试把 自己翻的~~鄙视上边机翻的~

I used to offer my service on etiquette in the Great Hall of People for one year.I really like here and I wish to work here with my favour.I could speak a little of restaurant-English and I'm now