这段话有语法错误码?

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这段话有语法错误码?急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急急!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!At last Sunday ,I went to the zoo at 9:00,and I played pingpong at 14:00,in the evening I watched TV at 8:00

句首,这时用Last Sunday就可以了

用句号分成好几句好一些

Last Sunday,I went to the zoo at 9:00.
And I played tabletennis at 14:00.
In the evening,I watched TV at 8:00.

应改为:On lastSunday,I went to the zoo at 9:00,and I play pingpong at 14:00,in the evening I watch TV at 8:00.

因为这是一整句话,一句话中只须把第一个动词变为过去式,其他不变