这句话写的对不对

I want to know whether the school will help students find a job opportunity.

ok

对

没错

这样说不好哦。
I want to know whether the school will help the students to find a job opportunity.
find the opportunity 找到机会。说“find a job opportunity”不大适合。
get the opportunity 得到机会
这样会好些：
I want to know whether the school will help the students to get the opportunity to find a job.