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My Friend in China
Mike is my friend.He is living in China.He speaks Chinese in the school.But he always speaks English to me.On Saturdays,he goes to the park to play basketball with me.he plays basketball very well.Always he wins,and I lose.But he doesn't to play ping-pong,I can teach he to play it.
Mike always happy.He is a good student.He is my good friend.
Mike is my friend.He is living in China.He speaks Chinese in the school.But he always speaks English to me.On Saturdays,he goes to the park to play basketball with me.he plays basketball very well.Always he wins,and I lose.But he doesn't to play ping-pong,I can teach he to play it.
Mike always happy.He is a good student.He is my good friend.
第二句最好改为：He speaks Chinese in the school,but he always speaks English to me.没有必要另起一句。
He always wins,and I lose.习惯上这样说，不过像你那样说也没有语法错误
But he can't ping-pang well,so I can teach him to play it.尽量用一些连词将简单句串起来
Mike always looks happy.一定要有动词
He is a good student,and also my good friend.逻辑性会强一些，多用连词！