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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/05 15:35:08
There are many animals with clever and strong in the vast ocean.Dophin is one of them.Although it isn't the strongest animals,but the brain of dolphin is the best except human being.They can grow up 1.2 to 4.2 metres long and weight is 23 to 225 kilogram.Mainly with fish ,squid,shrimp and crabs to eat.It has a maximum speed of 40 kilometres an hour.
Dolphin is very kind of people and it is one of our best friends.It usually save people from drowing.They can bring us amazing and happy.So please value our friend----dolphin!

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There are many animals in the vast ocean which is clever and strong. Dophin is one of them. Although it isn't the strongest animal in the world, the brain of dolphin is the best except brain of human being. They can grow up to length of 1.2 to 4.2 metres and weight of 23 to 225 kilogram. Mainly they eat fish, squid, shrimp and crabs. They can reach a maximum speed of 40 kilometres per hour. Dolphin is very nice to people and it is one of our best friends and they often save people from drowing. They can bring us amaze and happiness. So please value our friend----dolphin!

改正：
There are many clever and strong animals in the vast ocean.The dophin is one of them.Although they aren't the strongest animals,but the brain of a dolphin is the best after human