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could you please just turn down the music?because it disturbed my bed time.and woud you mind to let your daughter finish the piano playing earlier?I neet to sleep.one more thing,your boys always play football indoors,I don't think that's a good idea.thanks a lot.考虑到礼貌问题，有些句意表达得比较委婉。但不知道对句子意思有没有损害。希望能帮到你，水平有限，错误见谅！

Could you please turn down the music? Because you interrupted my rest.Would you mind to tell your daughter don't play the piano too/so late?Because I'll have a sleep.And could you please ask your son don't play football at home again?

Could you please turn down your music a little cause you've disturbed our rest. Would you mind telling your daughter don't play the piano till too late? We need to sleep. And please don't allow your son to play football inside.

Could you turn down your music,please?Because i want to sleep,if you do that you will disturb me.Could your daugter don not play the paino so long ?I want to go to bed.