大家都说这个不是外国人写的

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/14 02:05:43
Hello
My name is Michael am ghanaian boy of 22 yeas of age.am cool guy i have two brothers and one sister . am chocolate in colour and my hobbies are playing foot ball listern to music watching video and watching cartoons i would like to get female penpal like you. Please would you tell me more information about you ,family and country.
I'm hoping hear from you soon

Good Bye

Your newly friend
Michael
那外国的写法是怎么样的呢
外国人写的是怎么样呢

这个是外国人写的。尽管grammar有错误。但是表达很地道。

说句实话，这文章写得够烂的，语法错，而且很多单词重复还有就是有主语会漏，本来想帮你改改但是看了以后我觉的应该要重写。语法一定要注意！~~！！

i thing this article is very good, while it has kind of bad grammar, but at least i ascertain it is written ay a native enghish spoken boy, you know ,we study engish ,the ideal is communication ,not gramer .it is good for others to unerstand you.

不是外国人写的,因为your newly friend很明显应该是your new friend且署名处常用Yours,
Your sincerely...,love yours,