UC知道修改英语作文 急急急
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When you write a description of a person:
.Give some general information about the person
(eg:when/where he/she was bron,education,job)
.Use a variety of adjectives to describe the person's personality.Don't forget to justify what you write.
.Make a general comment about the person,if you like
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His name is Antony, we met in a theme park. he is come from LosAngels of united states, he was born in Mar 25,1988.now he is a freshman of Harvard university. he is really a good guy, he studies greatly in his subject, and he likes baseball so much, but he likes helping people more than baseball, and he love kids, everyone loves him,i think he will have a brilliant future. I hope it will help you a little bit.
.Give some general information about the person
(eg:when/where he/she was bron,education,job)
.Use a variety of adjectives to describe the person's personality.Don't forget to justify what you write.
.Make a general comment about the person,if you like
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His name is Antony, we met in a theme park. he is come from LosAngels of united states, he was born in Mar 25,1988.now he is a freshman of Harvard university. he is really a good guy, he studies greatly in his subject, and he likes baseball so much, but he likes helping people more than baseball, and he love kids, everyone loves him,i think he will have a brilliant future. I hope it will help you a little bit.
句式用得太简单.有几处语法错误.我给你改了一下.
His name is Antony, we met in a theme park. He comes from LosAngels of the United States, and he was born in Mar 25th,1988.Now he is a freshman in Harvard University. He is really a good guy. He studies hard on his subject.He likes baseball so much. Also he is willing to help others. He loves kids, and everyone loves him,too. I think he will have a brilliant future. I hope it will help you a little bit.(最后一句话意味不明)