加还是不加from

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写了几句话,对最后一句上海前面是否加from 不是很有把握了,希望大家不吝赐教啊。如有其他的错误也请指出。
我要表达的意思大概是 我已经提交了建立客户资料的申请。请查看。顺便问一下 我申请的礼物发出来了么?(我在北京给上海总部的人写信)
I had already submitted several request of the new prospects in the CRM system. Please can you check it? My CRM ID NO. is 2311 FYI. Thank you very much. PS:By the way, does the gifts leaves from Shanghai? :)

我还想这么说 does the gifts what I ordered leaves from Shanghai?
这话对么?如果不对该怎么说啊? 请大侠赐教啊 !

several request +s 变复数
pls can u check it? 改成 pls check it

does the gifts leaves from Shanghai?改为
Have the gifts left from Shanghai?
gifts 复数,不用does, leave 也不用+s
还是改为完成时好些吧

加(不是特别肯定,凭语感)

Please can you check it应该是can you please check it?
leaves 应该是leave
from 这是不需要

I'd already refer to establish the application of the custom's information,pls check it.By the way,do you sent out my application's present?