望高手帮我看看我写的这段话的语法错误!谢谢

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望高手帮我修改我这段话的语法错误和用语习惯,谢谢,改的好追加……
My parents were great comfort to me now!!!

The day before yesterday I received my scores of TEM8, just 54. It meant I didn’t pass TEM8 this year. There were 7 classmates who passed the examination. But I’m not in the lucky seven. Although I have prepared for the bad result, I couldn’t help crying at night.

Why didn’t the success come after working hard? I’m having a period of misfortune, and the period is so long, so long…everything goes wrong with me at my 22. It seems useless whatever I do to improve my poor English. I feel quite helpless about it. I didn’t pass the entry examination for post graduate because of English! My precious time was wasted because of English! My good mood became cloudy because of English! I’m not confident at all because of English!! I hate it!!!

My parents knew I would cry for a long time. They both called me to comfort me. My mum asked me not to pay much attention on the scores. And in

Nice to meet you!

I don't think there are some mistakes in your passage. When I finished seeing that, I understand u a lot. You still have another chance to pass it. And above all, please don't hate it as you are an English major. If you hate it, you'll never improve yourself in English.

Fortunately, I'm a lucky English major who had passed TEM8 two years ago. Now I'm still taking part in other English exams--about interpreters. And I should tell you that I faild once. Never give up. It makes sense.

If you really care the results of TEM8, Please never quit! You'll make it next year!

Believe in Yourself!