检查一下这篇很简单的英语短文有没有语法错误 尽快~

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88 Zhongshan Road
Shanghai
200020
P.R.China
Dear Wilson,
How are you? I have received the T-shirt which you sent to me as a gift. What a beautiful T-shirt it is! The colour of it attracts me a lot and the T-shirt is a beautiful fit. Yesterday I had a birthday party. Many people were invited to the party. We didn’t come to an end until 11:30p.m. Smmer holiday is coming, what’s your plan for it?
Yours
xxx
你们回答什么都给可以阿 猜一下也行 送积分给你啊

The colour of it attracts me a lot and the T-shirt is a beautiful fit
这句看着就不怎么舒服,你可以改为我很满意之类的话就好了吧
Smmer holiday 单词错误~~~