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Dear Mr . Hunt ,
While we were having lunch last week, I mentioned a job in our London office. I have now been authorized to offer it to you.
If you except our offer , it will mean that your salary will be increase. I have spoken to our accounts department and, according to thom, we are able to offer you an additional for hundred pounds a year. You will also be given four weeks’ holiday per annual instead of three weeks’.
I have enclosed some documents, one of which show our profit and loss account and other our plans for future expansion. You might like to look at these while you are considering our offer
Yours sincerely ,

Dear Mr . Hunt ,
While we were having lunch last week, I mentioned a job in our London office. I have now been authorized to offer it to you.
If you (except->accept) our offer , it will mean that your salary will be (increase->increased). I have spoken to our accounts department and, according to (thom->them), we are able to offer you an additional (for->four) hundred pounds a year. You will also be given four weeks’ holiday per (annual->annum) instead of three weeks’.
I have enclosed some documents, one of which (show->shows) our profit and loss account and other our plans for future expansion. You might like to look at these while you are considering our offer(加个句号.)
Yours sincerely,

When we were having lunch last week, I mentioned a job opening in our London office. Now I have been authorized to offer it to you.
If you accept our offer , it will mean that your salary will be increase. I have spoken to our accounts department and,