UC知道找错误（字数不多，但求专业）
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While working under my supervision for the research, Mr. Meng displayed an innovative and independent approach to his work, which allowed him to successfully complete the project. Take the research of graduation design for example, I made my decision to appoint Meng as the person in charge of the subject which he never touched before. Taking digging into the principle of Instant Message System as a breakthrough point, Meng did an excellent job ranging from pre-research, topic-selection to detailed procedure. Furthermore, his scientific way of thinking left a special impression to me. His determination and perseverance, coupled with his creative mind, helped him to analyze the problems using the effective approach. He is capable of analyzing problem from different perspectives, which prepares him for research work.
应该是一份推荐信，写得蛮好的，意思很清楚，只有几个小错误：
While working under my supervision for the research, Mr. Meng displayed an innovative and independent approach to his work, which allowed him to successfully complete the project. （Take->Taking) the research of graduation design for example, I (made my decision->decided，简洁些) to appoint Meng as the person in charge of the subject which he (had) never touched before. Taking (digging into the->an in-depth study of the) principle of Instant Message System as a breakthrough point, Meng did an excellent job (ranging: 删) from pre-research, topic-selection (through) to detailed procedure. Furthermore, his scientific way of thinking left a special impression to me. His determination and perseverance, coupled with his creative mind, helped him to analyze the problems using (the->an) effective approach. He is capable of analyzing (a) problem from different perspectives, which prepares him for research work.
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