请英语好的帮忙看看这段翻译有没有问题，最佳答案给予追加20分

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/10 19:52:53
原文：自2001年中国加入WTO以来，零售业的规模不断扩大，零售市场的竞争也日趋激烈。与零售业息息相关的一个新兴职业——导购，也在这个过程中不断发展壮大，在零售终端正发挥着越来越显著的作用。但由于导购职业在国内刚兴起不久，她总是受到一些误解，所以，作为一种新的职业，需要有人来研究她，一方面可以使人们更加了解导购这个职业，另一方面可以使导购在零售终端发挥更加重要的作用，促进企业销售目标的实现。
本文首先介绍了国际零售业的发展状况，通过对北京华联综合超市（武汉）有限公司中华路分公司一些具体情况的分析，并结合国内外目前对零售终端的研究，分析了导购活动在零售终端的作用，导购员是如何体现出自己的价值。在此基础之上，针对我国零售业中的导购面临的一些问题做出具体分析，并给出一些相应的对策建议。

译文：Since China has joined WTO 2001, retail trade's scale expands unceasingly, retail market's competition is also intense day by day. An emerging occupation which is closely linked with the retail trade - - purchase guide, also grows strong unceasingly in this process,and is retailing the terminal to play more and more remarkable role. But because the purchase guide occupation in domestic just to emerge soon, she always received some misunderstandings, Therefore, takes one kind of new occupation, needs some people to study her, on the one hand may make the people even more to understand that purchase guide this occupation,

Since China has joined WTO 2001.错
改：Since China has joined WTO in 2001.
and is retailing the terminal to play more and more remarkable role. 错
改：and it is retailing the terminal to play more and more remarkable role.
on the one hand may make the people even more to understand that purchase guide this occupation.错
改：on the one hand it may make the people understand that purchase guide this occupation more.
低级错误较多，中式思维方式吗，还不算太严重... ...
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相当好．．．按100分算的话，这篇我给85分‘．

Since China has joined WTO in 2001, retail trade's scale expands unceasingly, the competition is also intense day by day. Purchase Guide, an emerging occupation which is closely linked with the retail trade, also grows strong unceasingly in this process,and is playing more and more important role. However, she always gets some misunderstandings as a new occupation in domestic.Therefore, it needs to be researched as a new job, on the one hand, people can understand it deepl