帮我看一下这些英语语法和表述有什么错误？

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1 Vegetables contain a variety of vitamins, these vitamins are the essential to the maintain life. While the meat has fat which causes many disease.

2 The free time at noon is short, but in the evening we have enough time to prepare a excellent meal.

3 It will cause the stomach disease. People's body will lose the best chance to absorb the vitamins.

4 It looks fresh and clean, and it save your time. The environment of the Western fast food shop is good, and liked by children.

1. a variety of vitamins, these vitamins 重复 啰嗦 冗长.
且 essential 形容词 直接be essential to即可.无需加the/
maintain动词.动词前不用the.且maintain再次不要修饰life修饰health更号.
改为 Vegetables contain a variety of vitamins which are essential to maintain health,while the fat contained in the meat causes many disease.

2.The free time 不地道.想说休息的时间 用break
Noon break is short,but we have enough time to prepare an excellent meal in the evening

3.It will lead to stomach diseases so that one may lose the best chance to absorb the vitamins.

4.The Western fast food shop that provides the fresh and clean food and convinience is popular with children.
对了./没有liked by children这种说法.你是想说受小朋友们欢迎么?
用popular with /welcomed by/

1.vitamin 是总称，没有复数形式，disease要加s，要用复数
2.是对的
3.vitamin去掉s
4.save要用单三，加s,liked 前要加is,是被动语态。

1 Vegetables contain a variety of vitamins, which are essential to maintaining life. While meat has fat which causes many diseas