UC知道这篇英语作文通吗?(明天就中考英语了,急~```)
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How are you, I am a high school student. May 12 Wenchuan the earthquake disaster has brought you, your home has become a ruin, I was very sad. When the People's Liberation Army are the people who are trapped inside one by one of the rescued, I am very happy, but when I saw those orphans, the heart will be saddened by it.
I hope you in the face of disaster, never give up. I hope you can rebuild their homes. The people across the country are helping you!
I hope you can return to school as soon as possible!
句子本身有错吗?
不通顺
太中国化
注意下 时态
可以参考一下
Several days ago, there was a earthquake affected Ruchuan, Sichuan, China. And the resoult is thounsands people died from this earthquake, and now, the government is sending troops to that area to rescue those who servive, but yet, still stuck in the darkness. I saw many pictures about the situation there, many students died, a whole lot of died body, I cannot believe those are the student just like you and me, they were just like us, but now, a whole lot of corpses are stiring at me through the picture, telling me how they feel when they facing the death, and yell at me that they do not want to die, they are still young! Their city is distroied, but now, I am standing here, give you all the speech, this is such a easy work if compare to those who already died, I feel that I really is the lucky one, there is no earthquake here, I don't need to suffer in the dark, all my friend and my familly is all right, I'm still in g