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If I were Jane, will you leave Mr. Rochester?
I can’t understand why Jane left Mr. Rochester after her knew Mr. Rochester’s wife. And I think she was just refusing to enter the heaven.
So If I were Jane, I won’t leave Mr. Rochester.
Firstly, I believe that Mr. Rochester loves me, this is a very important reason for me not to leave him.
Next, I think that Mr. Rochester can deal with this things well, because he is filled with ability.
Thirdly, if I left him, he will be lonely, very lonely. so I will live with him, and let the time prove that he really loves me .
At last, just a imagination, if Jane didn’t leave Mr. Rochester, maybe the end of this story will be more perfect, less hurt, less loss.
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I can’t understand why Jane left Mr. Rochester after her knew Mr. Rochester’s wife. And I think she was just refusing to enter the heaven.
So If I were Jane, I won’t leave Mr. Rochester.
Firstly, I believe that Mr. Rochester loves me, this is a very important reason for me not to leave him.
Next, I think that Mr. Rochester can deal with this things well, because he is filled with ability.
Thirdly, if I left him, he will be lonely, very lonely. so I will live with him, and let the time prove that he really loves me .
At last, just a imagination, if Jane didn’t leave Mr. Rochester, maybe the end of this story will be more perfect, less hurt, less loss.
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第一行 would you
第二行 after she knew Mr. Rochester has wife
第四行 I would’t
第五行 me.This is……for me,so I don't leave him.
倒数第五行 he have the ability
倒数第四行 so应该大写So……let time prove
倒数第二行应该是 just an imagination, if Jane don’t