用过去式!!!!写英语作文:Andy在海滩上跑步,Susan和Mike在玩排球.Oscar在画画,Vera在看书.他们玩的很开心

Andy is running on the beach.Susan and Mike are playing volleyball.Oscar is drawing a picture,and Vera is reading a book.They are having a good time.
这样写一开始有点唐突，如果符合题意你可以在前面加一句：Today the weather is fine.Look!更通顺连贯
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