检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误

The film is <brother bear>. 中 的IS 改成was

我认为更好的说法是The film is called<brother bear>

这里就不用过去式了 因为他一直都叫<brother bear>

A man had changed into a bear 时态错误

不用过去完成时 用 一般过去式

A man changed into a bear

However, He hated bears. Then he lived with a

little bear 这两句话似乎接不上号

他恨熊 为什么还和熊住在一起

干脆从前面就改过来

A man killed too many bears. so he changed into a

bear .and although he hated bears ,he had to

lived with a little bear 我没看过这个电影 我只觉

得这样改比较通 虽然语法上你的没错

They help each other 改为They helped each other

He never killed bears 改为 他不再杀熊了更好

He didn't kill bears any more

还有The story told us it is wrong to kill

the animals.

改成 The story tells us that we should

protect animals They are our friends

好些

第一行中间 the film's name is ... 最后 A man cha