我需要英语写作方面的帮助！！！急急急

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有这样一个作文题：我需要一个例文。
人人为灾区献爱心
1.许多孩子太小而不能照顾自己too……to……
2.他们没有足够的学习用品和衣服enough school things and clothes
3.每个孩子都应该有上学的机会have a chance to do sth
4.我们应该做一些力所能及的事去帮助他们 as much as possible

呵呵，还可以啦，不过有些地方似乎还不是很完美。。
我来试试啦。。
many/a lot of children are too young to take care of themselves/look after themselves.(too many就没什么必要了，children 比较正式点。）
they don't have enough school things and cloths.(既然提示给了school things 那就用啦，they后面当然是加don't 啦。。）
every child deserves to have a chance to go to school.(觉得用deserve好点）
we shold do as much as possible to help them out.

Many children are too young to look after themselves.
They doesn't haveenough school things and clothes.
Each child should have a chance to do go to school.
We should do as much as possible to help them.