帮我看看这段话写的怎么样。。多谢！！！

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Dear All:

I am proud of joining in this team and I wish to make my dedication to XXX.

Feeling appreciated for your helps and advices. Especially thank Tom for all your assistance.

Best regards
Dear All:

I am proud of joining in this team and I wish to make my dedication to XXX.

Appreciated for your helps and advices. Especially thank Tom for all your assistance.

Best regards

Feeling appreciated for your helps and advices.
这句感觉有点问题。要么是i feel ...要么是后面要跟句话的。。不能单独这样一句话的吧。。

恩改过了就对了。。挺好的了~~

advice不可数的 不能加s

Especially thank Tom for all your assistance. tom是第三人称，后面的your是怎么回事呢？要么把for改为and也可以。

如果你初学英文，那能写成这样就很不错了，但是如果不是，那就得加强英文水平了

I am proud of -------I am so pround of 加强语气

appreciated后面不用跟for。就I appreciated your helps and advices.就可以。

写的很好呢！

Dear all,
I feel proud and honored to be a member of this united team. With what a great wish i want to make my dedication toXXX.Here I have thousands of thanks to you for your kindness.You have given so much help and advice.And my special thank must goes to Tom.I really aprreciate your assistance.
Best regards!
随便写写，呵呵．看有没可取之处