UC知道评下雅思作文多少分
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租还是买
There is a trend that more and more people nowadays perfer to rent a room rather than buy one. Although as we all know ture that renting room has lots of advantage. Personaly still consider buy one apartment or house is more suitable for common life.
To the major disadvantage of renting is lack of control over the property. The owners or managers of the property are responsible for repairs and general upkeep; if they do not do this well and promptly, you might be stuck with unpleasant or even unsafe living conditions for some period of time. Property owners can raise the rent whenever, making your costs higher. They can also put restrictions on the property, such as not allowing children or pets, and not permitting you to do redecorating. Another important thing need to be attention, renting is not a long time steady way for living, especially during the time of getting marry and rising children up.
On the contrary, the mainly advantage of renting is that people ca
There is a trend that more and more people nowadays perfer to rent a room rather than buy one. Although as we all know ture that renting room has lots of advantage. Personaly still consider buy one apartment or house is more suitable for common life.
To the major disadvantage of renting is lack of control over the property. The owners or managers of the property are responsible for repairs and general upkeep; if they do not do this well and promptly, you might be stuck with unpleasant or even unsafe living conditions for some period of time. Property owners can raise the rent whenever, making your costs higher. They can also put restrictions on the property, such as not allowing children or pets, and not permitting you to do redecorating. Another important thing need to be attention, renting is not a long time steady way for living, especially during the time of getting marry and rising children up.
On the contrary, the mainly advantage of renting is that people ca
6分，语法错误比较多，另外给你点建议就是别用太觉得的词，不懂的短语千万别用，英国老打分一般是扣你分，所以语法错误一多就扣的多了
5.5--6
一些单词有误
还有一些语法上的问题
建议多用自己确实熟练掌握的短语和句式
还有
我8月30号考雅思
如果可以
就小小奖励我一下吧
谢谢
P.S 大家都不容易啊~
5分吧
语法错误是一个
用的词语太口语化 比如more and more
其中有些句子逻辑也比较模糊
多了也就5.5了
语法错误确实很多。。应竭力避免
可能有意的使用一些长句子，复杂点的句子，不过结构和措辞都不理想
还有些单词拼写也有误
有的地方表达不清，不力，还要多加练习呢
5.5 有待提高。。