Revise the following sentences to make them direct, simple, and conversational.

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2. A request that we are making to managers is that they not spend all their time in their departments and instead visit other departments one hour a month.
3. we in management are of the opinion that employees have not been made sufficiently aware of the problem of computer security.
5. please be advised that it is our intention to make every effort to deliver your order by the date of your request, December 1
6. enclosed herewith please find the proposal which we have the honor to submit to our esteemed organization in regard to the acquisition and purchase of laptop computers
7. it has been established that the incontestable key to the future success of quadcam is a deep and firm commitment to quality.
8. it is our suggestion that you do not attempt to move forward until you seek and obtain approval of the plan from the team leader prior to beginning this project.
9. it has been determined by the staff that our process of check verification for customer

2. Our request to managers is not to spend all their time just on their departments but visit other departments one hour each month instead.

3. Our opinion of the management is employees have not been made sufficiently aware of the problem of computer security.

5. please be advised that it is our intention to make every effort to deliver your order by the date of your request, December 1

6. Please find the enclosed proposal which we have the honor to submit to our esteemed organization in regard to the acquisition and purchase of laptops.

7. it has been established that the incontestable key to the future success of quadcam is a deep and firm commitment to quality.

8. it is our suggestion that you do not attempt to move forward until you seek and obtain approval of the plan from the team leader prior to beginning this project.

9.Our staff determined the process of verification checking for customers must be simpli