帮我写一篇英文paragraph

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Using whatever resources are at your disposal, research a person who you feel has made an important contribution to the world, either past or present. Be sure to find a substantial amount of information to draw you conclusions.

Use all the information gathered, write an informational paragraph.

How to Writing Informational Paragraphs

1.Select a minimum of four related details (facts and information) from the many ideas provided by your research

2.Write a topic sentence, expressing the main idea of your paragraph, which relates to the details you have chosen

3.Write about the details you selected, explaining each one and showing how each supports your topic

4.Write a concluding sentence, which summarizes and closes your paragraph

5.Make use of transitional words and phrases to give your writing coherence

6.Write in complete sentences, using correct grammar, spelling and punctuation

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你的要求：
用什么资源时，您的处置，研究一个人谁您觉得作出了重要贡献给世界，无论是过去或现在。一定要找到大量的资料，提请您的结论。

使用所有收集到的资料，写了一个信息段。

如何写作信息段

1.搜寻最低限度的四个相关的详细资料（事实和资料）从很多想法，提供您的研究

2.写一主题句，表达的主要思想，其中涉及到的细节您自己选择

3.写有关详情，您所选择的解释，每一个都要显示如何相互支持您的主题

4.写一个总结句，总结您的全文

5.使用过渡词和短语，让您写作的连贯

6.用完整的句子，使用正确的语法，拼写和标点符号

7.使用您的一个标题，这反映了您的主题

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字数250-350?
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我帮你改一篇吧.这是我写的英语作文练习,帮你敲了一个小时的键盘.....
主题思想是表达他为黑人争取权利做的贡献很大,后来获得了诺贝尔奖.

我的英语作文段落：
标题:Neloson Mandela----a modern hero

Neloson Mandela fought for black people and helped black people get the same rights as white people.(总领全文)He was born near Transkei on 18th July,1918.He completed law degree at the university when he was 22 years old.And soon he formed ANC Youth League which helped poor black people(第一个事例).In 1952, he set up law office to help black people in Johannesbug(第二个事例),later this