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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/17 21:00:24
Recently,chinese parents go to extremes to train their thildren.They try their best to provide their children with the best life such as studing and eating.Their children are reluctantly instructed to have kinds of classes in the case of math,english and etc.It’s the purpose that their children get the success.However, children are not intersting in those courses,moreover, and excape from those coures. The parents are getting impatient.Eventually, only then do parents punish their children.Sarcastically, despite spending a geat deal of money,it frequently turns out to make their children unpleasant and get nothing in the study.With the society progressing,many parents are to provide enough information about inducating their children from TV and Internet and help children design their future to build upon interesting and to displace estrangement.

最近,中国的父母到极端,以训练其thildren.they尽力提供他们的子女与最好的生活,如学习和eating.their儿童是勉强指示有种班,在案件数学,英语等。它的目的,他们的子女得到success.however ,儿童是不是在那些有趣的课程,此外,和excape从这些课程的。家长越来越impatient.eventually ,只有这样,做父母惩罚他们的children.sarcastically ,尽管花了geat不少钱,经常原来,使他们的子女不愉快的和什么也得不到,在study.with社会的进步,很多父母以提供足够的信息,约inducating他们的子女从电视和互联网,并帮助儿童设计他们的未来建立后,有趣的和取代的隔阂。

Recently, Chinese parents to the extreme, to train its thildren.they try its best to provide their children with the best of life, such as learning and children are barely eating.their kind of instruction classes, in the case of mathematics, English, and so on. Its purpose, their children are success.however, children are not interesting in those courses, in addition, and excape from these courses. Parents increasingly impatient.eventually, the only way, do parents punish their children.sarcastically, despite a geat lot of money to spend, often the original, so that their children do not have a happy and what not, in study.with social progress Many parents