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We stayed together for some time, my mother and I, invaded by small night sounds and the raspy whirr of crickets. Then I stood up and turned to return to my room. Mother looked at me quizzically. Are you all right, she asked. I told her I was fine, that I had some c!eaning up to do. Then I went to my cupboard and stacked it up again with teddy bears and picture books.

Some years later we moved to Rourkela, a small mining town in the north east, near Jamshedpur. The summer I turned sixteen, I got lost in the thick woods there. They weren't that deep - about three miles at the most. All I had to do was cycle for all I was worth, and in minutes I'd be on the dirt road leading into town. But a stir in the leaves gave me pause.

我和妈妈待了有一段时间了,夜间的小声响及蟋蟀的悉簌声干扰着我们,我站起来转身回到自己的房间,妈妈奇怪地盯着我看,你没事吧,她问道,我很好,我有一些东西要洗,我回答她.然后我去了我的橱柜,把泰迪熊和图画书再堆到一起。
几年后我们搬到了鲁尔克拉,东北部的一个采矿小镇,靠近贾尔谢普尔.那个夏天我16岁了,我迷失在浓密的树林里,树林没有那么深,最多大约三英里,我所能做的就是转圈子找我认为该走的路,几分钟后我转到一条通往小镇的土路上,但是树林中的乱转倒给了我喘歇的机会.

我们住在一起一段时间后,我母亲和我,侵占小夜的声音和raspy whirr蟋蟀。然后我站起来,并转过身去回到我的房间。母亲看我quizzically 。你的所有权利,她问。我告诉她我是好的,我有一些方案c ! eaning起来做。然后我去了我的橱柜和堆叠,它再次与泰迪熊玩具,图画书。

一些年后我们搬到rourkela ,一个小的矿业城市在东北,近贾姆谢普尔。夏天,我拒绝了16 ,我失去了在厚厚的老虎伍兹。他们并不认为,深-关于三英里在最。所有我不得不这样做是周期为所有我的价值,并在几分钟后我要成为对污垢通往纳入城市。但轰动在叶片中给了我停下来。