改错题dear manager

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Dear manager,
I’m a student of there .Last weekend I went to shopping _______
in your supermarket . Your service was vert good ,and I felt _______
worried because there are some problem there .First ,The _______
windows of the walls are tightly close so the fresh are can’t _______
move in , which can easily lead to all kinds illnesses. Second, _______
there are large quantitis of goods in the third flood ,but they _______
are in mess . It is not easy to find the goods what I want to _______
buy . In addition ,the EXIT signs there can’t be seen casily .If _______
something tettibly happened , it would be difficult for people _______
to get off quckly . So hope that you can make some improvement. _______
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lihua
第一句是I’m a student of senior there

1去掉to,因为词组go shopping
2and改but,因为要表转折这里
3problem改problems
4close改closed,表被动(如果没拼错,那么in the walls ??)
5kinds 后加of
6in改on,在3楼
7 what改which
8 signs改sign,应该是名词
9tettibly改terrible,形容词就可以了,修饰名词的

10So后加I,缺少主语

基本就是这样了,消息吧,看看文章单词哪里打错了,影响啊