帮帮我啊！各位！谢谢

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编一段购物对话。（8句左右）
这是一个星期天的晚上，玛丽和她妈妈去商店购物，妈妈想为玛丽买一条新裙子，玛丽不喜欢蓝色的裙子，她最喜欢粉红色的。
Today is Sunday.
Mary and her mother go shopping.
shop assistant:Can I help you?
mother:Yes,do you have a dress?
shop assistant:Yes.do you like blue.
mother:Mary,do you like blue dress?
Mary:I like red dress.I don't like blue dress.
mother:Ok,do you have a red dress?
shop assistant:Yes.
mother:How many is the dress?
shop assistant:48 yuan.
mother:Ok。Here you are.
shop assistant:Bye-bye.
请不要用6年级以上知识解答，那里错了改那里！谢谢各位！

第二行,改成 Mary and her mother are going shopping. 因为你表演是正在进行时.
第四行,一般人都会说 I want to buy a dress 之类的,
第五行,一般是说 How about this blue one?
倒数第五行,热情的销售员一般会再招呼一句Have a look, please.
倒数第四行有一个语法错误,应该是How much is the dress. 钱不可数,用much
一般销售员把东西递给顾客的时候也会说一句Here you are.直接Bye-bye有点不礼貌.

不都编好了还问什么呢？

SP:shop assistant / sales person
M; Mary
E:Mother

SP: Good evening, m'm, how can I assist you?
E: We are looking for a dress.
SP: Which colour would you prefer? How about blue?
E: Mary, what do you think?
M: I don't like blue. I prefer pink.
SP: Let me show you some pink dresses. Do you like this one? It suits you. You can have a try on it.
M: Mum, this is great. I like this one.
E: It seems nice on you, Mary.
E: How much is this?
SP: It is 48 yuan, mdm.
E: OK, here you are.
SP: Thank you. See you.

on sunday's evening,mary and her mother want to buy somthing in the shop.when