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A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable in my life, but only one thing give me deeply memorable. As a child, I was so naughty that I often got into trouble. The thing had happened when I was six-year- old. One day, I went to my grandpas’ home, but there were no adults in home, only my two brothers, we were as natural as to play together. It was a very hot summer, so we began to play water that made ourselves to be getting nice and cool. We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us, sullenly I felled down the windowsill. We were all stupefied. At that time, I felled a hugely painfully come from my right arm. I know my arm was fracture, so I began to crying. My brothers calling my parents while comforting me. I was very afraid, they had given me very great courage. They didn’t leave me until my father came back. They took me to the No. 4 people’s hospital. Though it has passed for 16 years, I’ll forever rememb
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A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable events in my life, but only one thing give me deep memory. As a child, I was so naughty that I often got into trouble. The thing happened when I was six-year- old. One day, I went to my grandpas’ home, but there was no adults at home, only my two brothers, we were as naturaly as to play together. It was a very hot summer, so we began to play with water to let ourselves be feeling nice and cool. We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us, sulldenly I felled down the windowsill. We were all stupefied. At that time, I felled a hugely painfully comeing from my right arm. I know my arm was fracture, so I began to cry. My brothers called my parents while comforting me. I was very afraid, they had given me very great courage. They didn’t leave me until my father came back. They took me to the No. 4 people’s hospital. Though it has passed 16 years, I’ll remember it forever.