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帮忙修改一些语法的错误，然后润色一下。
要求：语句连贯，通畅。有一些好词，语法无误。谢谢了
ESSAY：讨论全球化的影响
Nowadays, information spreads faster and faster; and the types of transport, such as trains and airplanes, become more common and faster. These results are brought about by globalisation. Globalization is a process which makes the world to become a smaller place, especially, economic and technological forces. Some people think this globalisation bring negative influences, but another group against this opinion. In my view, I think this globalisation has both impacts.
First of all, I will show you the merits of globalisation – it brings modern life to human society. A smaller place which is made by globalisation does not means the earth area to become smaller, but implies the world connect closer. For instance, globalisation bring us easier life, faster traffic, cheaper goods more luxury houses and more jobs. The reason why globalisation brings modern life is that it c
Globalization 是这么拼写的.
然后.. Cooperations 这个词，文章里好像用的不对..
是不是想要说“Corporations”？
Discussing the effects of globalization
Nowadays, information is traveling faster and faster; and the methods of transportation, such as trains and airplanes, have become swifter and more common. These results are largely brought about by globalization. Globalization is the process that aids the world in becoming a smaller place, both economically and technologically. Some people think that globalization brings about negative impacts, but other people disagree with this view. In my opinion, I believe that globalization has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, there are the merits of globalization – it brings modern life to human society. By saying it helps the world become a smaller place, it does not literally mean that globalization reduces the size of the earth; it simply implies that better connections will be established in this world, and every